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Hey everyone! Been a while since my last pic, but here is a new one:
Any and all crits welcome as I feel that this pic is missing something, maybe something in the center of it, I'm not sure.
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I'd almost be tempted to lose the moon. It looks kind of fake or something, and kind of messes up the mood. For me the problem is that it gives the figure something very specific that they are staring at, rather than a into-infinity kind of gaze.
Not sure if that makes sense, or anything, but that's what I thought.
I like the POV, with the car cut off at the bottom and the grass.
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i would also take a look at the grass in the foreground. i can see that you're suggesting a low viewpoint but the fact that the grass is only on one side and doesn't really interrupt he form of the car is diluting what you're doing and doesn't help the clarity
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It's nice... I wouldn't lose the moon, but maybe move it to the left more toword the left edge and corner, and partially covered by a luminecent (sp) cloud.
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I feel like you should adjust the level of details, like tone down the car and background so we focus on the figure and the moon.
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