The Secret Thoughts of Harold Lawrence Windcrampe

[Phil McAndrew]

Hi everyone!

I just finished a new comic that I'll be printing up as a 44 page mini comic for SPX, but I like sharing things online too so I colored it and reformatted it for internet reading. Be sure to scroll to the right and please let me know what you think!

The Secret Thoughts of Harold Lawrence Windcrampe

[KidVideo]

Haha, thats great! I definately feel like that guy somtimes.

[Og]

That's a lot of fun, Phil. I really like it - like watching an animated short.

Only problem for online reading - sometimes it's hard to tell where one panel stops and the next begins, which potentially moves the characters to each side of each other, which makes the acting a bit unclear at times. (Did he pass the girl, or is he staring at her? Oh, I see...)

All in all, it's a really nice strip, and I'm sure as a minicomic, it's just great. Good luck with SPX!

[Sanaril]

Nice unexpected ending

[Harry Myland (IV)]

Hah! I laughed out loud at the end. I agree with Og about the panel breaks. It should be great as a mini though, I'll totally pick it up if I run into you at SPX.

[willmj]

This is Great! I really like the pacing and the ending is killer!

[anthony]

that was hilarious! i snorted 'cos i couldn't hold in a laugh.

[Noname the fox]

That's funny and true, I like the simplicity and scribbly lines. Keep up the good work, your other comics also rock!

[andrew fulton]

I'll be printing up as a 44 page mini comic for SPX,

THis would be awesome if you could get it printed up on one long sheet of paper, and it kind of folded out concertina style.
I really like the way you used colour, too.

[J-Minter]

This is definitely something people can look at and go "ouch, heee!"

the simplistic timing puts this together great. a good read. (I agree about panel separation, tho)

[Phil McAndrew]

Thanks for the input/compliments, everyone!

[Okie Dokie]

That was brilliant.