"A Battle between Light and Dark" webcomic
"A Battle between Light and Dark" webcomic
Hi,
I smell so new...and I'm amazed at all the work posted on this board. I hope my webcomic measures up half-ways.
My webcomic is an imaginative tale about the co-existence between the friendly creatures of the light and the terrifying beasts of the dark.
The site is updated every Monday with a new chapter.
Enjoy!
http://www.jasonloo.com/sunstone/
I smell so new...and I'm amazed at all the work posted on this board. I hope my webcomic measures up half-ways.
My webcomic is an imaginative tale about the co-existence between the friendly creatures of the light and the terrifying beasts of the dark.
The site is updated every Monday with a new chapter.
Enjoy!
http://www.jasonloo.com/sunstone/
- Charlie the choo choo
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Okay, I really like the style but I'm going to have to agree with the complaints about the scrolling frame. You could have a separate viewer page, and if you really want to include the scroll frame, do it where we can easily view two or three panels at once.
I wonder what happens to that girl...
Want to read more.
I wonder what happens to that girl...

Nice lookin'! I will make sure to read it all.
I used to have an inset frame for comics as well, but readers didn't like it. They find scrolling to be a foul, evil thing that they wish to avoid at all costs, unless absolutely necessary (like in an 'infinite canvas' comic). Here, I don't think it would hurt your presentation to serve the story up in smaller chunks for easier viewing.
The music is nice but unnecessary and distracting, especially when it plays automatically without warning. Let your work speak for yourself and it'll come across more clearly.
I used to have an inset frame for comics as well, but readers didn't like it. They find scrolling to be a foul, evil thing that they wish to avoid at all costs, unless absolutely necessary (like in an 'infinite canvas' comic). Here, I don't think it would hurt your presentation to serve the story up in smaller chunks for easier viewing.
The music is nice but unnecessary and distracting, especially when it plays automatically without warning. Let your work speak for yourself and it'll come across more clearly.
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I didn’t know that scrolling was a less preferred method to display a webcomic. This being my first one, I guess it’s good to know in the future. My main intention was to have the viewer scroll to the same tempo as the song, as if it’s an old-fashion silent moving picture, or a slideshow. For this certain webcomic, I found it was best to have it flow with a smooth downward motion on the mouse to go with the calm, soft ambiance, rather than having breaks within the action of the chapter. I hope this is a valid excuse for me to be forgiven.
Anyways, thanks for the kind words on my art!
Anyways, thanks for the kind words on my art!
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