Love In the Time of Acne: Chapter One

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Love In the Time of Acne: Chapter One

Post by Sheng » Tue Mar 15, 2005 4:33 am

Hey everyone, this is "Trailer", the first story from my and Nathan Huang's comic, Love In the Time of Acne.

We'd appreciate any comments, as we're revving up for APE; edits are still possible. Thanks :D

And Nathan's a tremendous artist, check his site out:

http://www.nathanhuang.com
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Post by EQ » Tue Mar 15, 2005 9:19 am

awe man, this brought back so many bad memories of my own. really great pages, everything is real tight.

-brad

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Post by hope » Tue Mar 15, 2005 9:46 am

Oooh, I really like this. More more more! Cute title, too.

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Post by uminthecoil » Tue Mar 15, 2005 10:01 am

That’s so sad and poignant...
Loved the P.O.V.s in the bus...
nice stuff...more please...:)
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Post by Greg T » Tue Mar 15, 2005 2:06 pm

Very nice. LOVE the title.
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Post by Kazu » Tue Mar 15, 2005 3:00 pm

Very, very nice. :D And I already love Nathan's work. He's local here and shows his work at Nucleus...
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Post by neil » Wed Mar 16, 2005 5:52 am

Very cool! The title reminds me of Love In the Time of Cholera; it's funny that you replaced the fatal disease with... puberty.

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Post by Rad Sechrist » Wed Mar 16, 2005 9:00 am

Hey Sheng. Wow, this is awesome. His artwork lends itself quite well to your writing. I would definitely buy this. Great stuff. My only critique is the design. Are you going to have it on grey paper? You might want to play around with that a bit.

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Post by Sheng » Wed Mar 16, 2005 10:50 pm

Thanks for the nice comments, guys. Say hello if you're at APE, I'll be at a table with Nathan & other artists.

The title is a deliberate takeoff from Love in the Time of Cholera. Glad it works.

Rad, it's great to hear from you again, glad you liked it. You've read all the scripts I think, combined with Nate's art, do you think everything will hold together? About the paper, I need to ask Nate, but I believe the first three pages of the story will be in the lighter gray tone (like page 1), and the last two pages will be in a darker gray (like page 4)

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Post by Rad Sechrist » Wed Mar 16, 2005 10:59 pm

Hey Sheng, I think his art works perfectly with your writing.

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