Ghost Bunny

fotodragon · Post by **fotodragon** » Sun Apr 27, 2008 12:42 pm

Hey Guys,
Here's an 8-page comic short I did called "Ghost Bunny." Always glad to get feedback,
Adam
www.adamfotos.com

k-9lives · Post by **k-9lives** » Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:30 am

Nice artwork, very psychadelic. Bizarre story but I like the way it kinda loops at the end leaving possibilities in the future. Are you doing anymore with this?

fotodragon · Post by **fotodragon** » Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:18 pm

Thanks, k-9. Your comic is pretty bizarre, too. They have a nice, simple flow.
I think I'll be doing another short with Ghost Bunny at some point. I'm putting together an anthology of short projects right now outside of my daily comic strip Dragon and Goat.

willmj · Post by **willmj** » Thu May 08, 2008 1:19 am

I really like this in a spooky way... would love to see more!

andrew fulton · Post by **andrew fulton** » Mon May 12, 2008 4:21 pm

Great little story Adam, I like your drawing too.
One thing that doesn't quite work for me, is that I don't always buy the ghost bunny as a ghost. It's like he is too solid most of the time or something. I don't know whether it is the linework or the colouring. I would maybe think about colouring his/her lines in a different shade to the other art? Or maybe bumping the transparency on the blue fill right down. The glow you have on the carrot makes it a little more ghostly than the bunny I think.

I love the couple of panels there when the carrot wakes up and realises where they are. Nicely done.

fotodragon · Post by **fotodragon** » Thu May 15, 2008 7:57 am

Thanks Will,
I think I'll eventually pick up Ghost Bunny after a couple other shorts I'm working on now. My primary comic is daily newspaper strip called Dragon and Goat- http://www.dragonandgoat.com . I'm working on another weekly comic called Cloud Kingdom that I'll probably post soon. I really have enjoyed reading eekeemoo.

fotodragon · Post by **fotodragon** » Thu May 15, 2008 8:03 am

And thanks Andrew,
I tried the transparency when I was first doing the pages, but Ghost Bunny got a little too camoflauged- and I kind of liked the goofiness of his opacity, as if he's just wearing a sheet.
I may try it again, but I'll definitely try changing the line colors, maybe some sort of glowing periwinkle.
I'm really digging the mumblier site, and the pantless super-heroes are great.

SideKick boy · Post by **SideKick boy** » Tue Jun 03, 2008 10:03 am

Very nice. Love the colours. Cleaver story too.

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