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Post by Bordeleau » Thu Nov 02, 2006 8:54 am

Two models for a wine label: which one do you prefer?
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Post by leonardofinocchi » Thu Nov 02, 2006 9:23 am

Cool stuff!

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Post by claytonian » Thu Nov 02, 2006 9:44 am

I'm gonna say the second one. KISS and all that
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Post by ethan » Thu Nov 02, 2006 10:48 am

Second one, yeah. Clean, loose, light.

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Post by Threshold » Thu Nov 02, 2006 10:59 am

second one. The footprints don't add anything and are distracting.

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Post by Og » Thu Nov 02, 2006 11:05 am

I'd prefer the first one for a comic. :) But for a wine label, the second one is cleaner, and seems to have the right feel.
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Post by Cre8vSteph » Thu Nov 02, 2006 11:37 am

The second one does fit the wine label theme better, but I am much more partial to the first as a style. I feel like the second one is a little over-styled.

Of course, you can always go with the first to try and market wine to a younger crowd... ;)

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Post by Bordeleau » Thu Nov 02, 2006 11:51 am

Thanks everyone ! The second one is more wine «labeling» too..waiting for the client feedback !
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Post by Frank Stockton » Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:16 pm

I like the drawing on the first one much better, I think if the line weren't black, but something close to the pink (maybe even a brown?) it would feel more "wine-y"

The footprints are distracting also, I"ll agree, but the thing that bugs me the most is that the upper right seems empty like either something's not there that's supposed to be there or for some reason you felt the need to put the bunny on center. I really wish he was pushed over a few notches so the text could breathe more.

that's all I have to say about that, good work.
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Post by Bordeleau » Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:26 pm

Good points Frank ( line colo, footprints etc..) ! Thanks !
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Post by campy22 » Thu Nov 02, 2006 2:55 pm

hmm..
I actually like the first one better, for a wine label.
It has a more "old age" style to me, and seems less streamlined than the other one which doesn't fit well with my idea of wine.

That's just me though.

I agree with the footprints part, and especially the white space in the upper corner.


Still, both are really nice!

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Post by -loo-bot- » Thu Nov 02, 2006 10:13 pm

I like the etchy-ness of the first drawing. It has that vintage quality to it.
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Post by Bordeleau » Fri Nov 03, 2006 6:30 am

So, 4 vote for the first and 4 for the second ! Thank for your advices everybody ! I take note and applied it on another rough presentation for the client but keep the footprints in grey ,cause the client want them ! A Alice in wonderland style will be great ..Again excuse my bad English writing Image
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Post by Nofret » Fri Nov 03, 2006 7:54 am

I'll go with the first one (or the remake of the first one), simply because I have a weak spot for an older looking style of illustration. Less "slick', but more classic.

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Post by Muffin » Fri Nov 03, 2006 8:38 am

I like the top one/the last one too. I think the rabbits face is better, and I like the footprints from the turtle.
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