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+ Junkyard [renamed]

Post by fuadmddin » Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:05 am

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My cel-shading attempt. I think it still needs more shadows and highlights.
I'm making a comic out of this character. But I think it still lack details and props.


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This one was made with OpenCanvas.



#-o Well. I seriously need help on defining my lines. The 1st one was traced back with illustrator.
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Post by aaron » Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:08 am

Sweet colors!

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Post by fuadmddin » Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:14 am

hehe thank you :)

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Post by Threshold » Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:43 am

Very much of the sweetness.
I like the 'cel-shading attempt,' but it's got some of the watercolor color variation style too. I'd like to see it finished.
Your coloring theory seems to be solid, specially on the opencanvas piece: shadows are flat, while light sources are additive. I would suggest more work on teh hair.

As for defining your lines: just ink it. inking takes a long time, but it's worth it, unless you have really clean pencils you can do with.

Thanks for the posts!

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Post by fuadmddin » Mon Sep 04, 2006 5:08 pm

thank you :)

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Post by jdalton » Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:31 pm

Is that pattern on his shirt and hat one you made or one you found? I'm a big sucker for patterning and I think it's a great idea, but patterns you make yourself are more betterer. :wink:
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Post by fuadmddin » Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:37 pm

i found it. it's included in the default toning in OpenCanvas's brushes. :)

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Post by fuadmddin » Tue Sep 05, 2006 4:44 pm

The latest. The lines were pencilled, and ink by a friend of mine. I colored for him. It's for a booth project at my college.

colored with opencanvas. [line art by Adam]
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the background was made with illustrator. [line art by adam]
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this is for my webcomic. [line art by adam]
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another photoshop attempt. made it for my girlfriend. [by me]
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:D please tell me what you think on the coloring. :)

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Post by fuadmddin » Sun Sep 10, 2006 4:55 pm

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Post by Threshold » Sun Sep 10, 2006 7:06 pm

Much improvement. The girl with the cup stood out as the best at first, then I saw the one for your girlfriend, and then I saw the last one. They're all awesome, but the cup one and the last one are really the best use of the style.

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Post by radiomouse » Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:10 pm

oooo, very nice! i really like the pose on the last one. one thing you might want to experiment is using soft and hard edges on your shading, depending on what's causing the shadow (ambient backlight compared to the fall of hair over the forehead). very nice character work :)

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Post by fuadmddin » Mon Sep 11, 2006 1:31 am

threshold : thank you :) i'm making a comic out of the character. still looking the correct styles to implement in the comic.

radiomouse : thanks :)

here are some sketches i did for the comic project :) comments will be appreciated :)

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Tuah. The Warrior Of Melaka. Was framed, and killed by the Sultan's minions.

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Jebat. This is Jebat. Best friend of Tuah, ran Amok on the claim of Tuah's death. Avenged his friend by killing, and manifested the castle. Drive away the Sultan out of the castle.

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some sketches :P

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some more sketches :)

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Post by fuadmddin » Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:52 pm

another one

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Post by Josh-Ulrich » Mon Sep 11, 2006 9:27 pm

Ok, not going to lie, from the first red and black image on down, is the best stuff you've posted so far. Looks great! Your loose work is definately more impressive than some of the cleaner illo's you've posted so far. keep it up!

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Post by fuadmddin » Mon Sep 11, 2006 11:24 pm

thanks :)

but many says that the lines isn't confident,

anyway thanks :) i'll keep em coming.

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