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nomi
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Fables are gone

Post by nomi » Thu Jun 30, 2005 8:14 am

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an illustration for an article saying that in modern world our belowed fables,that we were told in the childhood are just about to "fly away"
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Post by bradcolbow » Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:43 am

this looks really cool, good work. Where is this article running?

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Post by nomi » Thu Jun 30, 2005 10:34 am

Thanks.Um far-far away... :) Some magazine about...just about eveything rerally :) The title is ..eehh...umm...the title should be "Afisha" or something like that.Unfotunately i won't see it printed - the magazine is published in Moskow and i live...a little far from it.In the heart of Russia , to be sure :)
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Post by JP » Fri Jul 01, 2005 12:00 am

Nice technique. Looks neat. The right foot bothers me a bit, though. If it was in the same position as the left, I'd say it was perfect.
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Post by Frank Stockton » Fri Jul 01, 2005 12:35 am

Hello.

I don't think the piece is working with the article, if it's about what you said it's about. I think you should re-tool the concept if you can to try and come up with a better idea.
Aside from that, the composition isn't really doing anything for me and the drawing looks rushed rather than 'quick' which is what I assume you're going for.
Now that I think about it, the real reason I don't like the composition is because the solution for the article isn't making sense.

I hope that was helfpful, keep it up :)

FRANK

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Post by nomi » Fri Jul 01, 2005 8:36 am

Hey thanks! about composition - i know, there's no excuse for it but, when printed it won't look like that - it's a character for an article , and as i was said - magazine designer will put it in the right place...
Unfotunately there is no time for finding a better idea , cause the deadline is off...over , expired , whatever it should be written in english :)
AND then again THANKS!
ps: this may have been the crappiest job in my life - nothing is clear and some other people touch my work.. :evil:
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