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JoeCar
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FOR OLD TIMES...

Post by JoeCar » Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:40 am

These are 2 of the main characters for the first comic I ever penciled, Galaxy Kid.

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I decided that the piece needed a bit more life

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Thanks Lu

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Post by ZidaneTheKing » Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:38 pm

I don't know if you're interested in any critique, but here it is anyway.

The width of the line could use some variation, as of now having only one width is hurting the dynamic quality of the scene. I could also see the colors having a little more variety, but that's just my personal preference. For example, varying the value among the blues a little more.

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Post by JoeCar » Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:05 pm

Hey Zindane thanks for the critique much appreciated.

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