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eWerks
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fire kid

Post by eWerks » Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:55 am

Character idea of a kid discovering his fire ability.

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Post by squirpy » Sun Sep 14, 2008 10:35 am

I like the coloring style, especially on the fire.
I think it might work better if there was more expression in his face and pose. Right now, I think he's mostly indifferent, but ever so slightly depressed to find out that he can make fire. :P
I keep a sketchblog here

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Post by eWerks » Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:49 am

Thanks for the crit! I'm working on some other drawings and I hope to post soon.

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Post by Sanaril » Thu Sep 18, 2008 2:08 pm

I have to agree with squirpy, I think the expression really needs work... unless of course if he's supposed to look sad about it like the power is bad.

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Post by Blom » Fri Sep 19, 2008 6:24 am

It is a nice design, and it looks like your coloring is great to.
If you want ideas for more expression, there is a great chapter about it in The Illusion of Life - book. ;)
Tor Harald Blom

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