Stranded. updated w/ page1 ruff.

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Post by flood » Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:38 am

all right so heres a page1 ruff. this isnt any indication how the lines and figures will be rendered quality-wise. but it is how i plan to lay out the page so far. any comments concerning the layout or how the page reads would be greatly appreciated....

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lemme hear it fellas!

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Post by pokedachef » Sat Mar 03, 2007 3:09 pm

hah your characters look great in your style! very nice stuff here...i need to start making comics...
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Post by flood » Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:16 am

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Post by KevinR » Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:53 am

These pages are looking good flood, I look forward to the final versions. They read nice and easily and I get an idea of what's going on, so the message is clear. Nice work! :D

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Post by meesimo » Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:07 pm

Great clear storytelling, and those character designs are wicked nice. Lookin forward to some finished pages.
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Post by PaparazziPulse » Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:46 am

Great style. Simplistic, but eye-catching. Memorable, too.
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Post by flood » Sat Apr 14, 2007 9:00 pm

hey guys, sorry i havent been posting lately, i feel i owe an explanation as there have been many who have watched my thread with no updates..

the job i work has me traveling a ton. ive been to Atl,chi,bal,flo,slc,cal,nc,tx, etc. most of these are top secret areas or military bases that dont allow any electronic devices.

this is all in a two month window. so you can see ive had no freetime or extra time

but now im home for few weeks and i can promise you guys will be getting some pages to crit, if you still want to.


thnx

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Post by flood » Sat Apr 28, 2007 12:40 pm

i finished a warmup piece i was doing in between working on layout of page1

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lemme know

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Post by sam » Sat Apr 28, 2007 12:59 pm

Wow, cool characters ! And those first two pages look really good. I hope you're posting the inked pages, too ?!

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Post by Bordeleau » Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:12 pm

WOW ! Love it ! maybe I'l put some bubles on the water because of the squid movments (excuse my bad English writing !) More splash !
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Post by KevinR » Sat Apr 28, 2007 2:46 pm

Awesome work, flood, I love everything except the water. I think it needs to be inked in as well, to give it more presence and validity, at the moment it looks like thin blue plastic sheets, it feels too separate from the rest of the image.

Other than that, I can't wait to see more of this project, it's very cool work indeed.

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Post by Steve LeCouilliard » Tue Feb 05, 2008 12:08 am

This looks cool! I'm pretty keen on anything nautical. Is this being published?
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Post by samacleod » Tue Feb 05, 2008 12:42 pm

Wow, really enjoy your work. Great drawings!

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Post by Daystorm » Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:11 pm

Yeah, really nice work! Love the inking. Reminds me of Jeff Smith and C.S. Morse. Really clean. Are you using real brushes? Or some sort of vector inking?

Keep up the nice work!

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Post by flood » Wed Apr 09, 2008 8:19 pm

im using ink pen with brush tips

thanks for asking, im glad u enjoyed...imma have some new stuff up soon

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