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my first comic

Post by len » Wed Mar 08, 2006 2:16 pm

Hey y'all. Here's my first attempt at a comic that I finished a few months back. Kazu's workshop has induced me to share it with the world (via this forum).

A friend and I wanted to collaborate on a much longer story and as we started working we realized it would take a LONG time and we should start with a shorter experiment. So we took a stupid joke and made a two page thingie out of it. It has its problems but it's a start. Be sure not to miss the incredible punchline on page 2. Thanks for looking:

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Post by Lee M » Wed Mar 08, 2006 7:23 pm

Yeah, the punchline was pretty awesome...
Have you ever noticed how most of the trouble in the world is caused by people who claim to be trying to get rid of troublemakers?

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Post by Seth Wolfshorndl » Wed Mar 08, 2006 8:37 pm

Nice way to lead up to that ending with pretty "sincere" dialogue first.

Pretty good coloring, too.

-Seth Wolfshorndl
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Post by len » Thu Mar 09, 2006 5:55 pm

Thanks for the feedback.
Seth, I'm digging your weekly comic.
There are some really nice panels in there.

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Post by Seth Wolfshorndl » Thu Mar 09, 2006 9:13 pm

Thanks! Glad you like it so far.

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