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valentine comic

Post by bluebottle » Sun Feb 13, 2005 10:27 am

hej. hope you all have a good valentine.
here is my little comic/card for it

enjoy

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'something really witty/funny or profound here!'
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Post by Joseph Park » Sun Feb 13, 2005 6:55 pm

Very cute, man. Happy Valentine's Day.

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Post by chrisruggia » Mon Feb 14, 2005 12:14 pm

Really nice colors! The subtle texture works really well.

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Post by dan » Mon Feb 14, 2005 12:31 pm

aw. :)

I wish i were that creative, i just bought my girl some books. :)

dan
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Post by Mac McCool » Mon Feb 14, 2005 1:17 pm

Very cute!!

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Post by EQ » Mon Feb 14, 2005 6:09 pm

nice one denis.
-brad

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Post by rodguen » Mon Feb 14, 2005 11:35 pm

:D Super cute.
Nice development of the story.

That last panel's colours are really bugging me though.
It break away from the general feel of the previous pages and looks
horrendously "digital".
It does not convey the "intimate",warm touch i think you were going for.
It also upstages the scene,the drawing and the story as it stands out so much.
I don't want to be a pain nor a dick, but i find it sad to end your little story
on such a note,personaly.

Forgive me if i 'm offending you,but the ending is worth a lot better,if i may...

r.

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Post by yuria » Tue Feb 15, 2005 2:17 am

Lovely! And very cute indeed :)

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Post by bluebottle » Tue Feb 15, 2005 4:27 am

thanks everyone.

Rodguen: know what you mean. did try and desaturate colours after doing it but lost it somehow so left them. i blame trying to get the sunset colours right :wink:
'something really witty/funny or profound here!'
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Post by uminthecoil » Tue Feb 15, 2005 6:02 am

that tricycle is great...:)
loved the POV flow of this...good stuff
Andrew

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