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Post by Jason C-M » Tue Sep 14, 2004 7:07 am

great work here. 17 pages or 24, there's no way you should consider this a failure. Congrats on a job well done!
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Post by ChadTHX1138 » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:20 am

I meant to comment on this yesterday but didnt have the time...

Man... this was a well told story, it definately felt like it came from the gut..like it was something you truely felt inside because I felt it and related to it too. This is something alot of storytellers try to grasp and never do. Great great job.
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Post by mr cow » Tue Sep 14, 2004 9:13 am

man you do work fast but you put a lot of heart into 24 hrs! my favorite part was the phone sinking after the news your granfather died. it showed a nice sense of emotion.
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Post by Derek » Tue Sep 14, 2004 4:36 pm

I liked the blank page. That thing gives a comic a lot of impact. Like that blank page in the first Invisibles trade.

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Post by Jason » Wed Sep 15, 2004 1:51 am

As the other Jason said, I would hardly call this a failure due to the page count. 24-hour comic is just an excercise to help creativity, and you came out with a great completed story.

In addition to what everyone else has commented on, I think you captured the feeling of being a child very well. The way one reacts to the world and tries to understand it. Well done. It reminds me that I want to try this 24-hour comicking myself some day :roll:
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Post by yuria » Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:24 pm

Justin wrote:it actually reads "when i think about it now he always managed to win when he was playing cards with my father." having that space where the fathers head is does make it somewhat confusing to read tho.
I know - I'm all confused when reading this part as well. I still can't stop wondering what in heaven made me write it down this way :lol:


Thanks again everyone. I totally didn't expect such a great feedback. I just don't know what to say (I wish there was a *blushes* emoticon though)

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Post by Derek » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:44 pm

Did this comic take you a full 24 hours with no sleep?

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Post by incognito » Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:55 am

Hey Yuria, if English isn't your native language, what is?

I'm going to say one that is Slavic....


But yeah, this is great.
Very emotional...my grandfather also passed away when I was younger. And I too loved him very much.

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Post by yuria » Thu Sep 16, 2004 12:23 pm

Derek wrote:Did this comic take you a full 24 hours with no sleep?
Yep, full 24 hours. You can't imagine how many times I was like "screw this, I'm going to sleep", especially around 3 AM ;)

incognito wrote:Hey Yuria, if English isn't your native language, what is?

I'm going to say one that is Slavic.... (...)
It's Polish, so it's one of the Slavic languages. How did you guess?

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Post by Derek » Thu Sep 16, 2004 3:54 pm

Maybe he saw your self-portrait and then picked a foreign language that white people speak at random.

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Post by incognito » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:52 pm

Yuria sounds Russian/Polish/etc.
Your grammatical mistakes sound like one that a slavic speaking person would make.

Since I am Russian, I hear similiar grammatical mistakes from my parents and others.

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Post by bigg » Fri Sep 17, 2004 10:15 am

very cool. nice job.
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Post by EQ » Fri Sep 17, 2004 10:23 am

finally i had time to sit down and read this. awesome work. i really like the story a lot.
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Post by nil » Fri Sep 17, 2004 1:45 pm

That was EXcellent! No way that was a failure. Really good story. It didn't feel hurried, and the art is very communicative...I enjoyed it as a standalone story, not as a 24-hour one. good job! :)
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