A little story

[jskotte]

Hi all, this is a little comic I made, the story popped into my head one very rainy day

[pH]

Fun!

[SMVidaurri]

I really liked the story, great Idea, executed well. The pacing was nice

My only criticism was that I think you could have used a different font, or maybe done the word balloons in a different way, I think that would have improved the readability of your comic.

[thirdeyeh]

Very cool! I thought it was really magical and inventive. Can't wait to see what else you got your sleeve!

[jskotte]

Hi and thanks for the comments, glad you liked it.
Regarding the font, do you have suggestions for a better one, I just got tired of looking at the ones in photoshop, so just picked one, and I agree, it doesn't look too good, but easy to fix What do you mean by different way with the word balloons, shape, size, color?

[Joost]

Very good story, really original!

What you could try with the word balloons is make them wider and less high, that will make the sentences easier to read.