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A little story

Post by jskotte » Mon May 03, 2010 2:26 am

Hi all, this is a little comic I made, the story popped into my head one very rainy day :)

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Re: A little story

Post by pH » Mon May 03, 2010 7:49 am

Fun!
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Re: A little story

Post by SMVidaurri » Tue May 04, 2010 8:02 pm

I really liked the story, great Idea, executed well. The pacing was nice

My only criticism was that I think you could have used a different font, or maybe done the word balloons in a different way, I think that would have improved the readability of your comic.
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Re: A little story

Post by thirdeyeh » Tue May 04, 2010 8:42 pm

Very cool! I thought it was really magical and inventive. Can't wait to see what else you got your sleeve!
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Re: A little story

Post by jskotte » Wed May 05, 2010 1:34 am

Hi and thanks for the comments, glad you liked it.
Regarding the font, do you have suggestions for a better one, I just got tired of looking at the ones in photoshop, so just picked one, and I agree, it doesn't look too good, but easy to fix :) What do you mean by different way with the word balloons, shape, size, color?

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Re: A little story

Post by Joost » Fri May 07, 2010 1:24 pm

Very good story, really original!

What you could try with the word balloons is make them wider and less high, that will make the sentences easier to read.

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