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Third Red
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Muddy Boy

Post by Third Red » Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:04 pm

I did some sample pages in collaboration with a local writer as a pitch to a publisher.
Critiques are always welcome.

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Oh, and I did a color sample as well.

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And a brown version.

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Re: Muddy Boy

Post by gau dog » Fri Apr 02, 2010 3:53 pm

Hey! SWAMP THING!

The color version's the best. Concept-wise, it's kinda weird but fun. It's like we get the impression the kid almost dies drowning in the mud and then after he gets out, he just spontaneously sticks his head back into it! What superpowers does the boy already have to explore that the first narration refers to? The mud-vision's fun. Why're there two muddy boys? I mean, why have a supernatural thing birth another superhero when they feel so similar? Or is the other one like the Mudd-father?

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Re: Muddy Boy

Post by Third Red » Fri Apr 02, 2010 4:03 pm

Ha, yeah, good questions, I'll pass them along to the writer. The project is in rewrite phase right now. The editor's response was with some of the logic behind the story.

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