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Henna Hanson Must Save Prom

Post by kross29 » Sun Sep 13, 2009 9:11 am

hey guys, it's been a while but here's a preview for a comic i'm thinking about doing.

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i also can't remember if i posted these are not

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Re: Henna Hanson Must Save Prom

Post by Mr. Average » Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:25 pm

Really clean gestures, here - you have a very intimate grasp of human body language, obviously! And the limited palette of colors on the work below is quite effective. I dig it!

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Post by k-9lives » Wed Sep 16, 2009 2:17 am

I love the style of that Henna Hanson piece... are you developing that? Anything with Gestapo Bots sounds cool!
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Post by Craig Collins » Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:31 am

I really like the Henna Hanson preview - shouting 'IT'S THE 1980s!' right off the bat is a great way to start, it has real impact. First time I've seen a comic done like a cinema teaser trailer. Looks like a really fun idea, and lovely art work too, really energetic!

Just a suggestion and apologies if it sounds picky, but the last German Kaiser (King) was Wilhelm II who abdicated after the first world war, thus predating the Nazis. So unless there's some monkeying around with some historical events in your idea, there's no such thing as an ex-Nazi Kaiser.

Better coming from me as a friendly suggestion than some crank screaming at you!

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Re: Henna Hanson Must Save Prom

Post by Stick » Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:31 am

Craig Collins wrote:Just a suggestion and apologies if it sounds picky, but the last German Kaiser (King) was Wilhelm II who abdicated after the first world war, thus predating the Nazis. So unless there's some monkeying around with some historical events in your idea, there's no such thing as an ex-Nazi Kaiser.

Better coming from me as a friendly suggestion than some crank screaming at you!

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It says that the villian is an ex-Nazi General. I think Kaiser is his name.

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Post by Craig Collins » Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:39 am

"Kaiser" is German for Emperor, it's a title rather than a name. As in Kaiser Wilhem = Emperor William.

Not that it really matters....! Great looking comic, Kross.
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Re: Henna Hanson Must Save Prom

Post by Stick » Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:59 pm

Craig Collins wrote:"Kaiser" is German for Emperor, it's a title rather than a name. As in Kaiser Wilhem = Emperor William.

Not that it really matters....! Great looking comic, Kross.
I know what it means, lol. it's just that in the context of what he wrote, it's inferred to be his first name, not his title. Whether or not it's normal for it to be used as a first name is something else, especially since the translation comes off as "General Emperor".

I will state though I misread the title. So misleading. lol

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Re: Henna Hanson Must Save Prom

Post by kross29 » Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:37 pm

cool thanks for the replies guys.

as for the name info i really appreciate it. i came up with it cause i thought it would be funny to string those 2 words together. but now since i'm still developing this i could possibly fit that in to the origin of the character some way.

thanks again, great feedback guys.

i'll post more when i have it.

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Re: Henna Hanson Must Save Prom

Post by k-9lives » Fri Sep 18, 2009 2:13 am

I think stick mis-read this the same way I did....

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If you're developing this you might want to consider how easily that is mis-read.
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