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sam
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Post by sam » Thu Dec 11, 2008 12:13 pm

Hello Flight Forum,

haven't posted anything here in looong time (but i visit the forum quite often), so i thought it's time to be a little active again :)

I've drawn a little short comic not too long ago and i would love to hear your thoughts and critic on it.

You can find the comic here:
http://www.webcomicsnation.com/samrapp/ ... series.php

Thank you !

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Post by TomM » Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:24 pm

Hi Sam, I enjoyed your comic. The artwork and colours are done well and I thought the story has a nice feeling to it. The ending and last page were perfect!

I love that Belle and Sebastian song!

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Post by flyk » Mon Dec 15, 2008 6:24 pm

It was an enjoyable read : } ~

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Post by inverce » Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:05 pm

I love that song too.
The art was great!
I liked where this was going but I wanted just a tiny bit more at the end.
Maybe just more about the postcard or something. Dont get me wrong i love subtle endings, i even like cutoff hanger endings, but maybe even just a glace at the "see ya soon- love, blah" on the post card would fill in the gap?

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