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TomM
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Mystery in the Park

Post by TomM » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:21 pm

Hi! This is a short story I have been working on. Please let me know what you think! Constructive crit is welcome.

The text is a little hard to read in the jpegs but I have tested it for print and it seemed a lot crisper. Also there are a couple of spelling mistakes that I have fixed now.

Thanks for reading!


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KJones
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Post by KJones » Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:30 pm

I like it it a pretty good comic.

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Post by Agata » Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:40 pm

I like it - especially characters design and storytelling.

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Post by flyk » Mon Dec 15, 2008 6:29 pm

Nice style : } ~

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