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sam ship!

Post by marco » Sat Nov 22, 2008 8:00 pm

sam makes a friend...
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Interesting!

Post by J-Minter » Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:21 pm

I have to say, I love this. Personally, I think that while the momentum is great, pg. 4's sequence is a little confusing. Whereas the other pages have some obvious space that can replace any border, the first two portions of the page feel almost like a single panel, if only because the first presses into the second so much. perhaps if they were to be formatted with similarity to pages 1 and 3, it would be more obvious to any reader.

Heh, what do I know, just a thought. :P

Looks excellent.
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Post by marco » Mon Nov 24, 2008 1:59 pm

thanks for looking. those last 2 pages did not come as easily as the first. thanks for the crits!
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