A Folklore Cure - Completed

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Jacob
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A Folklore Cure - Completed

Post by Jacob » Fri Oct 10, 2008 3:00 pm

Hey, so this is my first comic I've ever done, so I hope you'lle enjoy some some little part of it, since I enjoyed making it so much.


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If you came this far, then thank you for reading.

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Post by dark77778 » Fri Oct 10, 2008 5:28 pm

It could use a bit of a touch-up, but the story was nice and short, happy that I read it.
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Post by Jacob » Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:11 am

Thanks, that's great to hear^^

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Post by Kid Galactus » Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:34 pm

Jacob,

I like this.

A lot of the panels have a fair amount of quiet and calm space about them. I do agree that you could have polished it a bit more... but the loose wispy lines add something to the story.

It took me a little while to figure out that the sick guy was the same guy hugging the kid in the last panel also... you might want to differentiate them a bit more.

Anyhow, good job!

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