Crystal Dreams

[roma]

This is a comic I started with a friend of mine. Its not finished I have 30 - 40 more pages to go before its done. I'm having trouble drawing the protagonist features identical every time. I feel the way she looks isn't consistent. (I'm kind of forcing myself to draw in this style) Any tips would be nice.

Constructive critiques on anything else is appreciated.

[Ben Montgomery]

This opening kindof reminds me of Loom

[roma]

Loom? I'm not familiar with it. Is it a comic, story or movie?

Edit:

I just did some research and found the game developed by Lucas Arts. The game is really interesting. Yeah, I noticed that the intro is similar. Mind you the story is completely different.

[roma]

double post...