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roma
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Crystal Dreams

Post by roma » Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:44 pm

This is a comic I started with a friend of mine. Its not finished I have 30 - 40 more pages to go before its done. I'm having trouble drawing the protagonist features identical every time. I feel the way she looks isn't consistent. (I'm kind of forcing myself to draw in this style) Any tips would be nice.

Constructive critiques on anything else is appreciated.


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Post by Ben Montgomery » Thu Aug 14, 2008 4:13 pm

This opening kindof reminds me of Loom
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Post by roma » Fri Aug 15, 2008 12:38 pm

Loom? I'm not familiar with it. Is it a comic, story or movie?

Edit:

I just did some research and found the game developed by Lucas Arts. The game is really interesting. Yeah, I noticed that the intro is similar. Mind you the story is completely different.

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Re: Crystal Dreams

Post by roma » Sun Sep 04, 2011 2:51 pm

double post...

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