One Swoop Fell - New Every Wednesday

DuttonArt · Post by **DuttonArt** » Fri Aug 01, 2008 5:35 pm

Hey everyone. I recently started up a weekly webcomic.

OneSwoopFell.com

Here's the first two installments. Hope you'll check out the site as I fill it with more stuff! Thanks for taking a look.

dark77778 · Post by **dark77778** » Fri Aug 01, 2008 6:32 pm

Wow, I really dig this so far. It's lighthearted, humorous, and seems to leave itself open for vast amounts of depth: everything I love about a story. Can't wait to see where it goes. Not to mention the characters seem vaguely reminiscent of some old educational cartoon characters.

andrewwales · Post by **andrewwales** » Sat Aug 02, 2008 12:51 pm

Adorable -- and mysterious! Can't wait to see where this goes.

inverce · Post by **inverce** » Sat Aug 02, 2008 4:27 pm

i enjoyed seeing this and the art in your gallery!

DuttonArt · Post by **DuttonArt** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 5:51 pm

Thanks for the comments guys. I'm glad to see the comic's off to a good start and receiving some positive feedback.

Here's this week's installment:

DuttonArt · Post by **DuttonArt** » Wed Aug 13, 2008 1:59 am

Sanaril · Post by **Sanaril** » Wed Aug 13, 2008 7:12 am

This is adorable

I love the sky and cloud colors you're using and the little panel with 'Welcome back' is just so cute!

Scott Hallett · Post by **Scott Hallett** » Wed Aug 13, 2008 7:15 am

This is absolutely refreshing and awesome! Love it!

thirdeyeh · Post by **thirdeyeh** » Wed Aug 13, 2008 7:42 am

Beautiful, beautiful work.

dark77778 · Post by **dark77778** » Wed Aug 13, 2008 8:42 am

Aw drat, there are humans in this? Ah well, there are humans in Rupert Bear as well, so I can't be too picky can I? It's still fantastic. Heh, and that last page was followed by Drops of Jupiter on the radio as I read it, which I found surpsingly fitting. How frequent do you plan on drawing these?

DuttonArt · Post by **DuttonArt** » Wed Aug 13, 2008 12:16 pm

haha, sorry dark, yeah there be humans here.

Regarding frequency, I've been posting on midnight every Wednesday. I'd like to be able to post twice a week, but that's something to work toward.

Glad everyone's enjoying it so far. Thanks for the comments!

willmj · Post by **willmj** » Sun Aug 17, 2008 10:59 am

I really love this... keep them coming

Harry Myland (IV) · Post by **Harry Myland (IV)** » Sun Aug 17, 2008 8:54 pm

.. This is why I love web comics. Good luck, man!

DuttonArt · Post by **DuttonArt** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:15 am

Thanks Will and Harry.... wow, put those names together and it almost looks like royalty is commenting on my comic. Nice!

At any rate, here's week five's installment.

As tempted as I was to go back to Swoop and Topo, I thought I needed to flesh out the introduction a little more with these three characters. Pacing a weekly comic is challenging for that reason, I'm finding.

dark77778 · Post by **dark77778** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 3:32 pm

Nah, I love it, it's suspenseful not going back to the intro characters. Watchman's doing it to me right now, making me skip ahead in the book just to read some bits with my favorite characters. I know, it's cheating but Jon cheats all the time so ha!

The last panel however, as cute as the cat thing looks (and slightly vampiric, which is cool to me) I think that it might do some good with some bound lines coming from the bottom right like the ones in the previous panel, or else to me at least, it seems like the cat suddenly just teleported into a hug. I mean I get the "lol, kitty!" idea but this feels sorta like "huhwhat...kitty?

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