My Comic (about the superpowers of food)

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waru
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My Comic (about the superpowers of food)

Post by waru » Sat Apr 12, 2008 6:30 am

Hi, I'm new here, but I like a lot of the comics that are posted here and was hoping to get some feedback on my own comic. It's about the deliciousness of food giving people great powers, and only the introduction is finished so far.

You can find it at:
http://beavertoe.com/EAT/

Any comments are welcome!

Thanks,
waru

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Post by waru » Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:33 pm

Sorry to post a link. Here's one of the pages to give you a taste of it:
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Thanks. Any comments at all would be welcome.

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Post by peterbruneau » Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:12 pm

I think the coloring is plain. You should try to use Photoshop or Paint.Net to create shading for the comics. The background should have more details. If you don't have time, just use some real life pictures.

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