Non Compatible - short story

madart84 · Post by **madart84** » Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:55 am

hey guys
this is a short i did last year for a fanzine me and my friends made.
will post some more stories once i translate them.

Rocky · Post by **Rocky** » Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:53 am

wow thats beautiful. I love what you did with the color. Is it all done digitally?

madart84 · Post by **madart84** » Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:33 pm

thanx rocky.
i generaly always pencil the comic out then paint over in photoshop
its good to have a tangible copy to work on

Yobi · Post by **Yobi** » Mon Jan 21, 2008 5:55 am

Beautiful work! My only complaint is that some of the text takes more than an instant to understand.

Third Red · Post by **Third Red** » Mon Jan 21, 2008 6:29 pm

I agree, the art and story are fantastic but the words are almost distractingly hard to read. Over all it is really great though.

J Clarke · Post by **J Clarke** » Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:44 pm

Very beautiful. Any pointers to working in photoshop that way? It is very much the opposite of how my own work tends to look.

I also agree with the other commentary on the lettering. I think the choice of font is great, but maybe a little bigger would do?

madart84 · Post by **madart84** » Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:25 am

goodmorning
yes i agree myself too with the lettering
the greek version was better spaced out and sized.

@J clarke
not much to say about any tips
just a lot of practice and keep your colours sharp and clean

tpiro · Post by **tpiro** » Tue Jan 22, 2008 11:28 am

Beautiful. I would love to see this larger. There seems to be so much detail (as well as legibility) that is lost at this size.

samacleod · Post by **samacleod** » Tue Feb 05, 2008 12:38 pm

Really nice work.

lynnticular · Post by **lynnticular** » Mon Feb 11, 2008 1:38 am

So beautiful. I love when digital looks almost like oil. Cool stuff.

madart84 · Post by **madart84** » Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:34 am

thanx everyone

@tpiro will find higher res pics to upload

Jeff Chapman · Post by **Jeff Chapman** » Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:59 am

Sad and grotesque! Super sad. The last panel of the closed door is a great understated ending. The look of the whole piece is absolutely gorgeous.

Nice work!

Jeff

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