2B That Someone - critique welcomed

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wikkidwikkid
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2B That Someone - critique welcomed

Post by wikkidwikkid » Sat Aug 11, 2007 4:10 pm

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There are a little bit of tweaks i have to make, but thisis what it is so far.

hope you enjoy

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Post by Muffin » Sat Aug 11, 2007 5:04 pm

I really enjoyed this. the story is... i dont know, but it keeps you along and its so sweet and.. :) I'm not sure what it is, but I liked it a lot. :) I also like your drawing style.
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Post by andrewwales » Sat Aug 11, 2007 7:53 pm

I think you did a nice job of introducing both minor and major characters right off the bat in a way that also set the tone and gave the setting. I don't know if this is based on something that actually happened, but I think a lot of people would say they could identify with it. I wonder what happens next!

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Post by KidVideo » Sat Aug 11, 2007 8:23 pm

So awesome!

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