Which ending is better!?

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J Clarke
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Which ending is better!?

Post by J Clarke » Sat Jun 30, 2007 10:28 am

Hello there everyone. I recently posted this webcomic on my site (mondaynightcrew.com) and the ending has sparked some debate between the writer and myself. I would love to hear some feedback on the ending, or the comic in general. Thanks!

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Post by andrew fulton » Sat Jun 30, 2007 1:21 pm

You mean to slam the door or not?
I think the little fez looks more upset than angry, so maybe the loud slamming of the door doesn't work.

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Post by J Clarke » Sat Jun 30, 2007 8:33 pm

I see what you mean. I hate trying to draw "sulky." It either comes across whiny or angry. It's very hard to strike that perfect balance when someone is upset and mad, and upset at being mad, and mad at not being able to do anything about it. Sulky is tough.
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