Ipod and Snow Patrol (Updated 07/17)

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Ipod and Snow Patrol (Updated 07/17)

Post by Joseph Park » Sun Jun 24, 2007 12:09 am

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Snow Patrol does rock... btw.
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Post by Threshold » Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:19 am

Hey... I think you have a really great setup-punchline possibility, but this is kind of awkward. It looks like you have the narrator setting up the joke, and that makes it kind of... forced. Also, Borah's expression is a little odd for the situation... she has this disgusted look on her face when a mischievous "Oh, darn... he found out" is more in order (IMO.)

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Post by Joseph Park » Mon Jun 25, 2007 1:45 pm

Thanks Threshold. I appliciate the critique, man.

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Post by Joseph Park » Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:49 pm

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