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by Dr.Uckmann
Tue Sep 05, 2006 9:55 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Chaos Theory
Replies: 6
Views: 1854

Ha, that was great. Good art and a funny story to boot.

-Neil
by Dr.Uckmann
Tue Sep 05, 2006 9:53 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Story of Dreams
Replies: 1
Views: 1078

Cool style and easy to follow. Looking forward to seeing more. Couple of crits: 1. In the "holy moly" panel where the key floats, it looks like toby is missing his left arm. 2. The cross-hatching in the third from last panel sticks out too much because you haven't used it anywhere else. I personally...
by Dr.Uckmann
Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:38 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: The boy who had doodles in place of his hands
Replies: 15
Views: 6474

That stuff looks great. I really like the style of your characters. Let's see more!
by Dr.Uckmann
Mon Aug 21, 2006 11:36 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: A page from a comic that I'm working on
Replies: 6
Views: 2681

I also like your style. The one thing that I would change is the angle in either panel 5 or panel 6. They way it is right now you have a jump cut and it's a little distracting. Now let's see more.
by Dr.Uckmann
Sun Aug 20, 2006 5:14 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Lilly Wolf - updated with Lilly Wolf #3
Replies: 11
Views: 3886

Well, it took me forever (damn full-time job), but, here is Lilly Wolf #3.

Edit: I made some changes to some of the panels.

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by Dr.Uckmann
Sat Mar 18, 2006 1:16 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: boing...
Replies: 12
Views: 3802

Cute. Not as good as the other onces you just posted but still great. I found this one predictable where the others ones had more of a "surprise" element to them.
by Dr.Uckmann
Wed Mar 15, 2006 9:43 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: boys...
Replies: 16
Views: 6346

Great stuff. The timing is spot on.
by Dr.Uckmann
Tue Mar 14, 2006 12:42 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Pyschosis
Replies: 4
Views: 2019

While I don't like the message you're going for, I have to admit the artwork is pretty evocative. You can probably clean up your lines just a little bit more to give your work a more professional look and still keep your loose style.
by Dr.Uckmann
Tue Mar 14, 2006 12:38 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: ROOK CITY is BACK!
Replies: 60
Views: 70992

good stuff man. The writing was much better on this one. Keep 'em coming!

-Neil
by Dr.Uckmann
Wed Mar 08, 2006 11:35 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: ROOK CITY is BACK!
Replies: 60
Views: 70992

I dig the style of this comic. You could probably push the white outline in the first couple of panels a little bit thicker. I think it will look a tad cleaner. I like the main character being lost in his written world. However, because I saw the gag coming it didn't payoff for me. That's just somet...
by Dr.Uckmann
Wed Mar 08, 2006 12:02 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Lilly Wolf - updated with Lilly Wolf #3
Replies: 11
Views: 3886

Thanks for the encouraging words Kazu! Hopefully the next one won't take as long.
by Dr.Uckmann
Tue Mar 07, 2006 2:28 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Lilly Wolf - updated with Lilly Wolf #3
Replies: 11
Views: 3886

Well here she is, 3 months late, a new Lilly comic:
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Let me know what you guys think.
by Dr.Uckmann
Wed Nov 09, 2005 11:00 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: A hunter!
Replies: 3
Views: 1741

I liked how succinctly you told you're story. Any less frames and I'd be lost; any additional frames and they would be redundent.
by Dr.Uckmann
Wed Nov 09, 2005 10:54 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Lilly Wolf - updated with Lilly Wolf #3
Replies: 11
Views: 3886

Thanks for the feedback guys. I realize that perhaps I left some story points a little too subtle and I will keep that in mind going forward. As far as technique, I sketched these in blue pencil on 8.5 x 11 printer paper. I then cleaned up the work on another sheet using a light table and a regular ...
by Dr.Uckmann
Wed Nov 09, 2005 1:34 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: EBONYC #40
Replies: 5
Views: 2219

I dig your style. Keep it up.